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We are beat but not broken.
Knocked down but full of this hope
The scars on our hearts
Remind us of darker days
But we'll carry on.

:iconblueyedpanda52:
We're doing Tanka poems in my literature class. I know the traditional way is 5-7-5-7-7 but I didn't know how else to put it, so I just decided to leave the poem this way. It's not exactly tanka, because it doesn't really fuse humans and nature, but I still liked it. I don't do poetry much, but I liked how this sounded... So... Thanks for reading :)

My other literature:

The Storm Chases Us The storm chases us
Through the barren fields of grey.
Darkened skies parted and we
Crashed into the sun.
Even the worst storm must end.
:iconragedarkfox:
~RageDarkfox Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is pretty neat :D Sometimes even if it isn't the exact same thing it still works, I wrote some Haikus back in High School that used a few more words then the traditional ones and I still liked them :) That is the beauty of art, whether it is through literature or any another sort of media, we can still step outside the boundaries to make something awesome :)
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